I really like the title screen effect! the puppet tool effect looks good I would just try to use multiple layers with different opacities to give the gases layers and not look so solid
I agree with Jay. It would be nice to see the cloud shift and move in form, and not just in motion. If you could make it more gas-like it wouldd be amazing. But that particale world seems to be working well for you, and it works well.
Maybe instead of using the puppet tool you should look into motion sketch? I don't know if you know about it but it will capture how you move your object around the screen and automatically set key frames that you can later adjust.
The title screen is a strong video. the puppet tool is not doing it for me, it looks good once the cloud is in the center of the screen so if you are going to use the video i would cut to it there, but It feels awkward coming into the center from the side of the screen. Definitely keep and play of off your title sequence is is really great at taking you by surprise and producing the enexpected, bring more of that into your video!!
This is looking great. A little awkward with the cloud but then again you are working with extremely complex systems that are based out of your own imagination.
The title looks awesome. I agree that the cloud does look sort of awkward but I know its difficult. Maybe look at other animated clouds to gain some inspiration.. http://youtu.be/-KUuoayD7G4
also toying around with a title screen
took another stab at the big bang. now with more rotation/radiation
I really like the title screen effect! the puppet tool effect looks good I would just try to use multiple layers with different opacities to give the gases layers and not look so solid
ReplyDeleteI agree with Jay. It would be nice to see the cloud shift and move in form, and not just in motion. If you could make it more gas-like it wouldd be amazing. But that particale world seems to be working well for you, and it works well.
ReplyDeleteMaybe instead of using the puppet tool you should look into motion sketch? I don't know if you know about it but it will capture how you move your object around the screen and automatically set key frames that you can later adjust.
ReplyDeleteLooking good on the cloud
ReplyDeleteThe title screen is a strong video. the puppet tool is not doing it for me, it looks good once the cloud is in the center of the screen so if you are going to use the video i would cut to it there, but It feels awkward coming into the center from the side of the screen. Definitely keep and play of off your title sequence is is really great at taking you by surprise and producing the enexpected, bring more of that into your video!!
ReplyDeleteThis is looking great. A little awkward with the cloud but then again you are working with extremely complex systems that are based out of your own imagination.
ReplyDeleteThe title looks awesome. I agree that the cloud does look sort of awkward but I know its difficult. Maybe look at other animated clouds to gain some inspiration.. http://youtu.be/-KUuoayD7G4
ReplyDeleteThis is cool. I can't wait to see it finished.I agree with the awkward cloud thing. Just find a way to make the flow a little more organic.
ReplyDeleteThe title looks great, hopefully more time working with the cloud will help you resolve the movement issues.
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